by mindingutter
Usually, I'm an understanding guy. If a man acts like a shit, he should get treated like a shit, but this guy does not act like a shit (he acts like a dumbass for not getting out of there as soon as possible though), so when the girl is MAKING HIM EAT HER SHIT, I just feel sorry for the poor guy. How could somebody like this? It's disgusting!
this is so brilliant, i have been reading stories like this for fifteen years and this is easily one of the best ever. awesome situations,surprises, and hardly any cliche.................. two thumbs way up!
Goodness me what a story, it describes so well the situation I would love to find myself in. The manic sadist is a brilliant invention, totally unpredictable, never letting you relax and inventing such disgusting games for you both to play. Mindingutter you did so well to write this !
Sorry it took so long.
What a great combination: skillful author, a vivid imagination, an admirably--and admittedly--dirty mind all wrapped up in a wonderful story line.
Best part is I've got several chapters yet to be read and enjoyed.
And hopefully there will be many more in future.
Thanks to everyone for their comments and feedback. I'm honored, considering there are so many great writers here.
Really well written and compelling. Could have done without the vomit though.
I agree with most others. Brilliant writing and plotting and backstories. I disagree with those who find shit eating and vomit disgusting (well, literally they are correct - such things leave a bad taste and are not good for gustatory purposes - but i enjoy reading about them very much and would gladly participate).