All Comments on 'Dead Write Ch. 02'

I found this chapter most entertaining. The interesting way you used plumbing terms and turned them into sexual innuendo is very skilful and incredibly funny.

Good job with the romantic tension and uncertainty of their situation. Incorporating the child is so often missed by so many authors, I suspect you have raised children of your own. The dialogue, innuendo, and subtleties are well crafted and genuine. Great chapter.