All Comments on 'Deal's and Decision's'

I found this hard to read in places, an editor would do some good to the story.

Stream of consciousness writing is awesome. Let it flow baby, let it flow. You write well enough on the technical level to achieve clarity. Your thoughts get ahead of your ability to write them down and this is when the magic happens. Just keep writing, trying to catch up. At the end of your session, then go back and fix techie stuff.

.. hurry. cant wait for the next chapter!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed that and i cant wait for the update, this story has lots and lots of protential.. and i like Nick alot and she is just what he needs, her cheek and his dominance makes for fireworks. I think your on the right track building your characters profile. Keep writing great job.

I am looking forward to the next chapter. The story line is great draws the reader in!

Cruelty, coercion, prostitution and very badly written to boot. Can't even get the title right. 1/5, please fuck off.

please update !!! :)

write more!!!! lol its humorous and juicy and sexy this is really good Good Job :3

please hurry with the next chapter! cant wait for more! brill read!

Waited so long and this story was so good! Very interesting! Please continue soon!

One of the worst stories I have read on Literotica. Don't write anymore and you will be doing us all a favor.

this story has so much promise. already love the two leads and this story is ripe with fun and sexy themes. love it.

Ohh please don't leave it like this continue the story more more more! !!!!!

More!!!!!

I cannot wait to see where this goes!

I know its a long time since this story was written but please keep going and finish it, it could be such a juicy story. I check very couple of months to see if theres a new chapter. One of my favourites!!!

Please add more

This is saved as a favorite of mine and I am constantly checking fo updates. Please finish...