All Comments on 'Dean has an Older Lover Ch. 02'

In your typical Literotica offering, a man having his first experience with a woman is able to fuck like he's been doing it all his life, and give her umpty-nine orgasms before having his own. Reality is somewhat different, and this story gives a truly realistic view of what that first time is like for many men. And... Realism is far more erotic that exaggeration, wouldn't you say?

Keep 'em coming (no pun intended) I like your stuff. Again, you need to get a good editor/proofreader to catch all the boo-boos. Otherwise basics are good. Story develpement is good. Just a few glitches in execution. Keep up the good work.

This is a great story. When is the next chapter?

Patiently waiting for the next chapter. This is one of the best stories I have read here, very true to life. Like the comments above, can't wait to read MORE.

He is doing nothing to contribute to the very one sided relationship. He is a taker and not being a lover.

Thanks for sharing.

Love the story line... not too late for Part 3.