All Comments on 'Dear Diary...'

I didn't buy the premise, and that shot down the entire story.

For instance, why would she be planning to spend the entire night in an empty school? Didn't she say she was most of the way home before she realized she didn't have her math book? It's inconsistent. Also, why would she inform her diary she "had a boyfriend" -- I mean, wouldn't the diary already be filled with references to him?

Decent writing, but the plot and characterizations need major help.

Your dairy entry (?) has is unbelievable. It reads as if it is a letter from the forum section in a Penthouse Magazine!

The writer is skilled but the whole story seems rushed and the sex happend too easily. Please keep on writing as I think there are a lot great stories you could tell us. Unfortunately, for this story I agree with the prior comments.