All Comments on 'Death Can Be Fun Ch. 01'

I think the story was quite humorous. Imagine 2 horny ghosts trying to do it.

Not too bad, not too bad.

Very well written. I loved the humor and unique point of view. I look forward to chapter 2.

I reviewed your story in the Author's Hangout New Story Review thread. The humorous character really caught and kept my attention right from the start. Great read, and I'm looking forward to more.

Don't usually read non human stories,but have to admit I got into the spirit of things with this one!!

Very funny and original. Well written as well.

liked it but where is the next ch.?

unusual/original, well written, humourous....

would like to read the next chapter! any plans for more?

please continue this excellent begining