All Comments on 'Death Can Be Fun Ch. 01'

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alikerryalikerryover 8 years ago
a good start

please continue this excellent begining

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story!

unusual/original, well written, humourous....

would like to read the next chapter! any plans for more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Whats next?

liked it but where is the next ch.?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent read

Very funny and original. Well written as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
!

Don't usually read non human stories,but have to admit I got into the spirit of things with this one!!

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 18 years ago
Great story

I reviewed your story in the Author's Hangout New Story Review thread. The humorous character really caught and kept my attention right from the start. Great read, and I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Original and entertaining!

Very well written. I loved the humor and unique point of view. I look forward to chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Quite entertaining

I think the story was quite humorous. Imagine 2 horny ghosts trying to do it.

Not too bad, not too bad.

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