All Comments on 'Death do us Part'

by cpete

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tazz317tazz317almost 7 years ago
ONE SHOULD NEVER PISS OFF THEIR PALLBEARERS

you cannot carry yourself to the grave. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Solid...

All around good story. I could support family payback like this...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Taken From A True Account?

I heard of a similar true account.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
even though and ''as she wanted''

Grant some commenters are correct-just for SAG-that Anthony's family did kill wife, they did so to fulfill her wish to forever be with her soulmate

boatbummboatbummover 6 years ago
Quite Satisfactory

And I love the elements of "true story" that you weave into your tales.

On a more serious note, EVERYONE should be an organ donor IMO. Since I'm an old fart, I don't know how much use any of mine will be when I pass, but I'm all for donating whatever parts might help someone else before they convert the rest to ashes and dust.

penneydog55penneydog55about 6 years ago
Take That Bitch!

Bloody Hell did she choose poorly, or was it bad timing? Yeah I enjoyed it a lot thanks ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

cub4acougarcub4acougaralmost 6 years ago
one word

fanfuckingtastic

StormKing33StormKing33over 5 years ago
5* Unique, not the usual LW tired cliche dtory

Wow!!! Clever writing that blends physical and emotional justice. Death of spouse vs. Painful Divorce, which is easier to recover from with good family and friends, plus Kim in the wings.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Best

Probably very near the top of all time LW BTB stories. Best of all, the cheating bitch was burned by the self immolation of her bastard lover. Classic.

ThematchthatBurnsThematchthatBurnsabout 5 years ago
Oh for a loving family.

Sad that pain relief was working!

PaddyyddaPPaddyyddaPover 4 years ago
I once donated an organ

They still play it at church every Sunday!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Again

One of Cpete's best BTBs. Love to see cheater and lover both go out permanently.

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
Great story burn cheaters burn

So far away the light shit that's hellfire she had last thought

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I willingly donated my organ to hundreds of cheating wives.

Women are sneaky, self-centered bitches. I've repeatedly fucked over two thousand married women and about 10% of them were honest enough to admit the truth about themselves.... that they were whores for the excitement or for a longer and thicker cock than they were getting at home. Most were just neglected... not being paid attention to... needed a good fucking and when they got it, they were hooked and gave me total access to what they're husbands were too stupid to use. I had an excellent hideaway where they could come to be fucked and made love to before going home with her pussy full of come to be a happy, well adjusted wife.

Five stars....

lee5456lee5456about 4 years ago
Burn bitch burn

A truly great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow.

That this sort of happened.. I am speechless

MarkT63MarkT63almost 4 years ago
Good

Best to save Anthony from that slutty bitch.

lee5456lee5456almost 4 years ago
I'm an organ donor

I tried to donate my organs a lot of times. But now that I'm elderly no woman wants it. LOL

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Justice😂 at last.

The best BTB of all time

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Almost a Mystery Story

Great Story. I was confused until the end. 5*

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago
Agin

There is not a more deserved BTB, than Kate's, ever written in the history of LW. The only problem is that the old fashioned morphine drip lets her go too easily. At least she knows what's coming, and that Trey is already gone.

InfosaugerInfosaugerabout 3 years ago

I would really like a mystery sequel where this bitch meets with her drug-Trey in hell.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 3 years ago

Nice

And a happily ever after.

Well, not for the cheating, and now dead, cunt.

Isn't fiction grand?

NonSequitourNonSequitouralmost 3 years ago

Well deserved end for her.

I have some quibbles about the transplant scenario. If Anthony's brother's power of attorney allowed him to change the recipient (with the collusion of sis Mary Beth); I can't believe he couldn't stop it entirely. While Anthony was willing to leap on the operating table to donate organs to save his "loving wife"; it seems extreme for his siblings to donate to strangers. Every surgery under general anesthesia has risks, i.e. Anthony is in an induced coma.

Anthony will surely believe his siblings about Kate and not demand to see hospital records; but the savings account being emptied will raise questions as to why. The organ recipients will need to suppressed/dissuaded from inquiring about donor Anthony.

From Kate's unfiltered/drugged opinions of her husband's apparently upstanding family and her complete financial cluelessness; how could someone be married to such an IDIOT.

SunnyU2SunnyU2almost 3 years ago

Anthony's family shouldn't have went against his wishes - Even if Kate was a lying cheating racist s**t

most like, Anthony will never talk to them again

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Best BTB ever written on Literotica. Bitch deserved to die.

MightyheartMightyheartover 2 years ago

Loved it.

5/5

Great BTB

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

This classic is one of the best ever. Cheating bitch has the comfort of knowing that Trey is waiting for her in hell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I wonder if there are people in the world as brazenly selfish as this woman. If so, I hope I never meet them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just the second cpete story I've read but know I have to read the remaining 34. Too bad he doesn't appear to be writing any longer. I like his no hold barred style of handling a problem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was too dark. No hospital administrator nor LE even if related, would do these things. Based on your storytelling, ALL the family members reflect that they will do the right thing, under Him, and they have definitely left the reservation this time. Their retribution will come when they are visiting St. Peter, I assure you. I gave you a 1 because there is no option for a 1.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Go family go.

Yeah family!

I know families that would do that without hesitation

mfbridgesmfbridgesabout 2 years ago

Don't mess with the family.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Ouch, what comes around, comes around! 5*s.

eljj546eljj546about 2 years ago
Great story

100 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

that is the way to treat all these scumbag democraps officials and voters who love themselves, never donate to others(anything personal that would affect their marvelous lives).

5*s, rk

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Enjoy writing about women dying for their sins?

You have a very small soul. The greater the rage that fills your heart, the smaller your spirit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

@Anon. before me: that wasn’t a woman dying for her sins, that was karma. It’s a bitch, ain’t it?

5⭐️s

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She is one cruel, narcissistic bitch whose moral compass committed suicide in here teens.

Cito22Cito22over 1 year ago

Awesome. If she had been remorseful and guilt ridden I would have said yes, save a life. But after her admission, mindset, right of entitlement, nah nah nah, hey hey hey, good bye. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

...and literally they are rotting in hell. Imagine dying but never able to die, in grotesque pain and never finding relief.

Bet Anthony's family will enjoy heaven. Well done cpete. 5

muddman74muddman74about 1 year ago

Very cool story! She definitely got what she deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Page one, you twice referred her "finance Trey." Do you understand the difference, or did autocorrect trip you up? Back to the story. JPB

26thNC26thNC12 months ago

Perfect ending to a great story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Weird story. The wife Kate was a cartoon villain. Was like a weird LW version of a harsh Twilight Zone. Not one of the author's best but give thr author props for trying to be creative and bold.

mariverzmariverz11 months ago

muy bueno!!!

eres notable, muy bueno cuando quieres.... BTB en llamas.

prueba con un RAAC ahora, con algo de BTB pero con el corazón de un RAAC jajaja

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman9 months ago

LOL Great, all of it.

KtYe3XKtYe3X9 months ago

I'll drink to that solution!

oldpantythiefoldpantythief8 months ago

I have to wonder if there really are people in the world like Kate that are so self-centered and selfish? I'm guessing the next thing they need to do is cremate her to give her a push on her trip to hell.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

5 star story!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

How did Anthony not know that his wife was such a selfish entitle racist bitch? And process servers ask for ID so it is unlikely that his brother mistakenly received the divorce papers

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wow the wife probably should be nominated for one of the worst LWs of all time. She is pure malice and self entitlement. Yikes. Like how Anthony's siblings are cleaning up the mess without his knowledge.

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