All Comments on 'Death do us Part'

Wow the wife probably should be nominated for one of the worst LWs of all time. She is pure malice and self entitlement. Yikes. Like how Anthony's siblings are cleaning up the mess without his knowledge.

How did Anthony not know that his wife was such a selfish entitle racist bitch? And process servers ask for ID so it is unlikely that his brother mistakenly received the divorce papers

5 star story!

I have to wonder if there really are people in the world like Kate that are so self-centered and selfish? I'm guessing the next thing they need to do is cremate her to give her a push on her trip to hell.

I'll drink to that solution!

LOL Great, all of it.

muy bueno!!!

eres notable, muy bueno cuando quieres.... BTB en llamas.

prueba con un RAAC ahora, con algo de BTB pero con el corazón de un RAAC jajaja

Weird story. The wife Kate was a cartoon villain. Was like a weird LW version of a harsh Twilight Zone. Not one of the author's best but give thr author props for trying to be creative and bold.

Perfect ending to a great story.

Page one, you twice referred her "finance Trey." Do you understand the difference, or did autocorrect trip you up? Back to the story. JPB

Very cool story! She definitely got what she deserved.

...and literally they are rotting in hell. Imagine dying but never able to die, in grotesque pain and never finding relief.

Bet Anthony's family will enjoy heaven. Well done cpete. 5

Awesome. If she had been remorseful and guilt ridden I would have said yes, save a life. But after her admission, mindset, right of entitlement, nah nah nah, hey hey hey, good bye. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

She is one cruel, narcissistic bitch whose moral compass committed suicide in here teens.

@Anon. before me: that wasn’t a woman dying for her sins, that was karma. It’s a bitch, ain’t it?

5⭐️s

You have a very small soul. The greater the rage that fills your heart, the smaller your spirit.

that is the way to treat all these scumbag democraps officials and voters who love themselves, never donate to others(anything personal that would affect their marvelous lives).

5*s, rk

100 Stars

Ouch, what comes around, comes around! 5*s.

Don't mess with the family.

Go family go.

Yeah family!

I know families that would do that without hesitation

It was too dark. No hospital administrator nor LE even if related, would do these things. Based on your storytelling, ALL the family members reflect that they will do the right thing, under Him, and they have definitely left the reservation this time. Their retribution will come when they are visiting St. Peter, I assure you. I gave you a 1 because there is no option for a 1.

Just the second cpete story I've read but know I have to read the remaining 34. Too bad he doesn't appear to be writing any longer. I like his no hold barred style of handling a problem.

I wonder if there are people in the world as brazenly selfish as this woman. If so, I hope I never meet them!

This classic is one of the best ever. Cheating bitch has the comfort of knowing that Trey is waiting for her in hell.

Loved it.

5/5

Great BTB

Brutal! Loved it!!!

Best BTB ever written on Literotica. Bitch deserved to die.

Anthony's family shouldn't have went against his wishes - Even if Kate was a lying cheating racist s**t

most like, Anthony will never talk to them again

Well deserved end for her.

I have some quibbles about the transplant scenario. If Anthony's brother's power of attorney allowed him to change the recipient (with the collusion of sis Mary Beth); I can't believe he couldn't stop it entirely. While Anthony was willing to leap on the operating table to donate organs to save his "loving wife"; it seems extreme for his siblings to donate to strangers. Every surgery under general anesthesia has risks, i.e. Anthony is in an induced coma.

Anthony will surely believe his siblings about Kate and not demand to see hospital records; but the savings account being emptied will raise questions as to why. The organ recipients will need to suppressed/dissuaded from inquiring about donor Anthony.

From Kate's unfiltered/drugged opinions of her husband's apparently upstanding family and her complete financial cluelessness; how could someone be married to such an IDIOT.

Nice

And a happily ever after.

Well, not for the cheating, and now dead, cunt.

Isn't fiction grand?

I would really like a mystery sequel where this bitch meets with her drug-Trey in hell.

There is not a more deserved BTB, than Kate's, ever written in the history of LW. The only problem is that the old fashioned morphine drip lets her go too easily. At least she knows what's coming, and that Trey is already gone.

Great Story. I was confused until the end. 5*

Justice😂 at last.

The best BTB of all time

I tried to donate my organs a lot of times. But now that I'm elderly no woman wants it. LOL

Best to save Anthony from that slutty bitch.

That this sort of happened.. I am speechless

A truly great story

Women are sneaky, self-centered bitches. I've repeatedly fucked over two thousand married women and about 10% of them were honest enough to admit the truth about themselves.... that they were whores for the excitement or for a longer and thicker cock than they were getting at home. Most were just neglected... not being paid attention to... needed a good fucking and when they got it, they were hooked and gave me total access to what they're husbands were too stupid to use. I had an excellent hideaway where they could come to be fucked and made love to before going home with her pussy full of come to be a happy, well adjusted wife.

Five stars....

So far away the light shit that's hellfire she had last thought

One of Cpete's best BTBs. Love to see cheater and lover both go out permanently.

They still play it at church every Sunday!

Sad that pain relief was working!

Probably very near the top of all time LW BTB stories. Best of all, the cheating bitch was burned by the self immolation of her bastard lover. Classic.

Wow!!! Clever writing that blends physical and emotional justice. Death of spouse vs. Painful Divorce, which is easier to recover from with good family and friends, plus Kim in the wings.

fanfuckingtastic

Bloody Hell did she choose poorly, or was it bad timing? Yeah I enjoyed it a lot thanks ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

And I love the elements of "true story" that you weave into your tales.

On a more serious note, EVERYONE should be an organ donor IMO. Since I'm an old fart, I don't know how much use any of mine will be when I pass, but I'm all for donating whatever parts might help someone else before they convert the rest to ashes and dust.

Grant some commenters are correct-just for SAG-that Anthony's family did kill wife, they did so to fulfill her wish to forever be with her soulmate

I heard of a similar true account.

All around good story. I could support family payback like this...

you cannot carry yourself to the grave. TK U MLJ LV NV

very compelling story .

a well deserved fate for the whore !

Some anonymous stated that the organ donor doesn't get to say who gets the organ. My friend's bother needed a kidney his younger brother gave him one of his. A guy at work gave his supervisor at piece of his liver. There you go idiot. Also they other idiots say that they killed the wife. These anonymous are also idiots. The wife died due to the side effects of using recreational drugs. Thus she killed herself. To receive transplants there has to be a good chance that she will survive the operation. Since she had a bad heart she was a poor organ transplant candidate.

Love the metaphors butttttt, why would the drugs Kate took not be residual in the other organs - making them unusable? I applaud the harvesting!

This is why I detest lethal-injection execution - here is a person with evil intent taking from society and is allowed to snub his/her nose at society by insuring their organs are poisoned and unusable, Execute them on the table while harvesting to give life back - if it painful so be it. Or at a minimum execute in the same exact manner they took the life providing their organs remain harvest-able.

For the do-gooders here, I was sent to pull a trigger and killed, I can easily push a legal button. Vietnam Vet.

I've read hear. Of course it is fantasy, and in all likelihood would never work, but it was enjoyable as a BTB story. The sad part, or happy part is that Anthony will never know. I really was surprised by the way the story went.

It looks like there are a number of commenters who believe that an organ donation can't be changed. It can occur anytime during the process if the doctor believes that the organ recipient becomes non viable. Having a bad heart as well as bad kidneys and liver results in a re-evaluation. Obviously the doctor wants the operation to be successful so after discussions with the hospital organ transplant committe, they can change who will get the organs. The wife was not a good canidate particularly from the aspect that she caused her organ failures by using illegal drugs. Also two organs could save two sick people rather than one druggy! Where I live a drug addict would be low on the organ donation list. As for the husband, his family could just tell him that the doctors reassigned his organs based on her failing condition.

Now burn the one detailed on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com.

Serial cheating wife has engaged in adultery her entire 3rd marriage. According to her own accounting of lovers, she would tell current lover about past ones, by 2005, her 12th year of that marriage, she had had at least a dozen affairs. Easy to do when she had concurrent ones. During affsir detailed on Facebook she told that lover she was jealous of her married BFF who was engaged in two affairs. At the time she was only boffing a college student whom as his instructor she had coerced into having sex. But within a month of making that statement her BFF had arranged a meet and greet with friend of one of the guys she was screwing. When she started harassing student for sex she was involved with two married men and was still quite friendly with the vice-principal of her sons' high school. When her eldest son had failed to graduate in 1999 from Three Forks Montana high school, she used sex to convince vice-principal to bend the rules and figure out way to get him diploma. From what I was told she was cozy with four married men other than her husband part of 2001.

Husband knows about cheating, even received call one Saturday telling him she was at Helena Montana motel with a lover, husband drove by motel but did nothing. Well he did go to her mother's house and break down sobbing about where she was nd what she was doing. He asked HER OWN MOTHER what to do. Her reply DIVORCE THE SLUT!!

HE DIDN'T. He did threaten to divorce her when he called hdr later that day. But chsnged his mind. Even after when the phone rang at their house later that afternoon and he answered with her sitting their. A female friend of her lover was wondering if lover was there at his house.

Story goes she ended that one right away, but according to her lover was a drunken ranchhand and would call her at 2or 3am in morning. She got caught by husband after having taken phone out onto deck. He was furious. She lied and said it was her Marine son stationed in Japan. Not long after, that ex-lover was picked up on 3rd DUI. Seems he had been stopped because of broken tailight. Word was that she was responsible. She knew where he drsnk and needed to stop him from continuing to call her.

50th birthday she had black widow tattoo put above left shoulder blade

Check that Facebook posting out

twist to the old B T B !!!

EXCELLENT STORY!

Loved it what goes around comes around!

Karma is a bitch, hey?

How is it misogynistic to be glad that a cheating slut pays for her sins?

Not Paying back is a bitch too

... I wish it was true but the bell never rings that way. By the way the government is not the country, the people are the country. Panther fan.

"The liver portion went to an ailing Vietnam vet. It's great that the country can repay his service".

How is that exactly? The liver came from Anthony, not the country. His government doesn't give a shit if he dies in the street, he served his purpose to them. So how is the country repaying him exactly? By allowing a stranger to donate part of himself to save him? Didn't have to do much, did they?

Very nice tight story. Boy, it's great to have loving siblings, isn't it?

Seems there is a god after all. And karma can be such a bitch.shall we just put it down to poetic justice.

Thanks for the offering.

i couldn't help but smile at the end of the story....nice way to put it...*thumbs up*

Fucking cunt and her asshole lover got what they deserved.

Fire and brimstone.

HA

and that's what stories should be. 5*

I had to read his description of what the old nurse told him twice to make sure I understood. The wife was getting the donation due to damage to her from (I hope a sudden) car accident. The husband's parents found out about the attempted service, and stopped the donation-possibly killing the wife who had sought the divorce. Boy don't mess with that guys parents! OldBear

This was not a well written story, it was really an outline and the editing?! I really fail to see why all the writers who use mikothebaby thinks she is so fantastic, the amount of errors in this alone shouldn't have been there! Finance instead of fiance? THRU instead of THROUGH, that's just a few of them. I know I know you all claim you make changes after she has worked her 'magic' so what you're really doing is selling her out or she really isn't a very good editor.

And get some Pampers for you and your brother while you're at it!

If I could, I would have given it 10 Huge Stars!

Perfect revenge on a cold hearted cheating cuntrag!

Great story of an arrogant self centered shallow uncultured slut getting her due cold plate revenge. Everyone deserves a second chance a moment of weakness a stumble in the wring direction we all have our moments. What challenges us is the fact that people of character realize right from wrong review their actions develop a strategy for no repeats and strive for better days ahead. Our main character the wife, she cheated over a long span of time repeatedly with intent and total disrespect for her husband her marriage and herself. There are no redeeming qualities about her and her abhorrent behavior. She went so far as to clean out joint financial accounts and a planned celebration with her fuckbuddy where she consumed illicit drugs which destroyed her body necessitating transplants which her doting husband gladly volunteered without the knowledge of her deceit. She might have lived if she hadn't planned her deceit and divorce, but her husband's family became aware and thwarted her husband's valiant effort to save her life. Her arrogance deceit led directly to her demise. The author made this character in a masterful construct that I loved to hate. Her demise was well described to her in graphic detail alerting her to the purposeful power behind the hateful nature of her own actions. This seemed clearly a total consummate revenge on a very icy cold plate. The author designed this revenge in graphic almost 3D well done!

This was one of the best got you wife stories. It`s nice when a plan comes together.

Take a bow, for a masterpiece.

For all the cucks out there i can just imagine how sad they must be. Justice has been served.

This story sums it up...karma is a bitch!

I've seen a lot of things in my life. But this story was HARSH ! Great job. 5/5.

PS: I'll be reading the rest of your work.

loves to get his cornhole buggered, what a odd duck, Gay Male section ---> over there butt-bandit

I wonder what type of BBQ sauce they will use on her ass in hell?

Now that`s how to BURN a cheating Bitch!!

Kate is one cold hearted bitch!

Now she will burn in hell knowing she and her cheating lover can burn together. Ah, that's the stuff sweet dreams are made of. Ha

don't see any murder here (response to previous comment), not helping isn't the same as harming. Actually, in the US anyway, healthcare is a for profit enterprise. how else to explain hospital closings in underprivilaged areas and refusal of care to those w/o health insurance. Universal health care for all!

there are free available editors by the dozens, probably hundreds, either

I never realized how many college English professor there are on this website.

like she lived her life. Now knowing the real score RIP K8....TK U MLJ LV NV

Great job done here. Thanks a heap author.

I did not know how much fun it could be fucking over a slimy druggy and cheating skank, I know now. And looking at it after reading it twice, it has to be one of the most humorous stories I've read in ages. It should have been tagged as humor. Now, I believe I'm going to take a walk down Mammary Lane to get rid of the taste of the flamers that wouldn't know a good story if it bit them in the ass.

instead of "jizz" - more sophisticated

If it walks like a duck, quacks like a duck...

If it walks like a duck, quacks like a duck...

The idiot anon should read my comment before commenting. It just makes you look stupid. I'm not going to waste any more time on you. You're not worth it.

You really hate women, don't you.

Whether this is based on a true story or not, it's badly written, a little hard to follow and the editing could have been better.

Like the way she got all of her feelings out until it was to late to retract. and she will get to see Trey :-)

At the end of this submission cpete wrote the LW tale is related to a nurse’s recollection about parents who stopped a transplant from their son to a wife about to divorce the son. The author never implied the LW yarn he wrote was a “TRUE” story-only the author had based some of the circumstances in his fable on the nurses job related account.

Medical caregivers let patients die all the time. Ask any nurse about morphine given to terminal and DNR patients to “manage” the pain. Biggest open secret in medicine, everyone in the field knows about.

Also organ donors just like blood donors can specify who gets their organs.

How ridiculous... the story your wrote here and referenced as if it happened in real life would be murder. The recipient has to become unstable MEDICALLY and an MD would have to make the call to change. Doctors don't typically commit murder just to satisfy stranger's fits of jealousy and anger. Oh and by the way, the organ giver has 0 say in who gets the organs.