All Comments on 'Debbie's Adventures Ch. 06'

This was dark, very dark. Too dark for me, sorry. But as always it was well written and I am sure people will enjoy it. Thank you for this series and your other stories you are a very good writer. Please continue writing.

This is a first-rate series that seems to have gone on a bit too long. Still, I loved the originality of the main character; instead of the most voluptuous, most perfect woman, you've shown us an example of for want of a better description I would call today's aimless youth. For this reason I don't think the ending worked. It's a dramatic resolution comparable to Mel Brooks's "in the end they all get hit by a truck [lorry]."

Still, the first Debbie series was superior to most of what I've seen on this sight.