All Comments on 'Debrief'

najwa karam is christian

Thank you to the Literotica fan who told me Najwa Karam was not Muslim. I apologize for this mistake and have submitted an Edited version of the story. Deewa, my second choice because I liked her music less, has been inserted into "Debrief" in Najwa's role and the story is changed otherwise. I will keep this comments as my punishment. Enjoy readers! See, I can be taught. :)

I found the switch between 3rd and 1st person in the first section slightly jarring, but liked the style you used when Clarke told the story to Cat and Doug. Vivid characters and healthy, open sexuality. Enjoyed.