All Comments on 'Deflowering Evra'

I did enjoy editing this story for You. It was very well written and rather erotic. Your discriptions were nicely composed also. Keep up the good writing my friend and i'm sure Your audience will appreciate You...smiles.....angel.

A really fantastic erotic and romantic story, well written.

I loved reading it.

of many of the stories that I have read in alll of my long years, I find this is one very well made, very well thought out story.

It seems to me that the author took his/her time in crafting this particular story, going into a good amount of detail in the telling, which is always what will draw a person into the story and make them want to read it.