by LaLaLady
I spent the past few days reading your story.
It's wonderful.
*****
Make the story interesting by creating a part of it where Deldre cheated on Tolem with one of her male servants. As it was one of the facts about past royal families.
This was one of the best stories I've read in a while. Please don't do as someone said and make her cheat on tolem. Let's keep the story with a happy ending.great job. Keep up the good writing. Best wishes on your continued success in writing.