by McCrow
I enjoyed the humor, but the meta-comments about things like the monster manual and Gygax made it difficult to gauge the internal reality of the story, which kept pulling me out of an otherwise funny and sexy tale. As a matter of personal taste, if it were me I'd keep the references to Tieflings, Dryads, Gorgons, etc. but lose the meta material. Fun story!
lol really funny n awesome xD n ironic she should have told the guy she was a gorgon lol
I like the unexpected end of the story. A fall like this totally exquisite