All Comments on 'Deika: Stone Cold Sexy'

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ShenariaShenariaalmost 13 years ago
Reality level

I enjoyed the humor, but the meta-comments about things like the monster manual and Gygax made it difficult to gauge the internal reality of the story, which kept pulling me out of an otherwise funny and sexy tale. As a matter of personal taste, if it were me I'd keep the references to Tieflings, Dryads, Gorgons, etc. but lose the meta material. Fun story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

lol really funny n awesome xD n ironic she should have told the guy she was a gorgon lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice fall

I like the unexpected end of the story. A fall like this totally exquisite

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