All Comments on 'Deliverance'

by MarlboroWoman

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Tall_cool_oneTall_cool_oneover 19 years ago
Outrageous!

Every now and then the victim should be the victor. Nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Intense

I don't find it erotic, but this story is well done. I suspect it's a true protrayal of the depths of despair suffered by victims of abuse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hitchcock would love it.

Good job...well crafted. Nice surprise ending. Not erotic, but better underplayed than overplayed. What some call erotic is nothing more than an anatomy lesson. If you wanted it to be more erotic, you could have her get a little excited by the treatment.

Ghost BearGhost Bearover 19 years ago
Too short....

but well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice

Amazing. Loved it.

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