by MarlboroWoman
Every now and then the victim should be the victor. Nice touch.
I don't find it erotic, but this story is well done. I suspect it's a true protrayal of the depths of despair suffered by victims of abuse.
Good job...well crafted. Nice surprise ending. Not erotic, but better underplayed than overplayed. What some call erotic is nothing more than an anatomy lesson. If you wanted it to be more erotic, you could have her get a little excited by the treatment.