All Comments on 'Demon Prince of Mangala Ch. 01'

by TheWitcher

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bad_girl69bad_girl69over 14 years ago
interesting

I did like how this story started out. Im very curious as to who that guy really is....is he really a dangerous man? lol Please write the next chapter asap. I really want to know if he was affected with the kiss as well? Or was he just being the womanizer that everyone says he is.

kiwiplumkiwiplumabout 14 years ago
small thing

Good start to the story, I like the mixture of times you've used. The only small thing that seems incongruent is the use of the work fuck by her for some reason.

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