All Comments on 'Demon Surrogates'

i so want to see the kids

I agree with the previous two posters, how about telling the story of the kids, and maybe a furtherance of the plot with the demons relatives?

Would have loved to read the high school kids' story, too. Demon convinces them to have an orgy or something. Ugh, yes.

Good story, very well written shame you didn't do another 3 chapters of the demon having fun with the children.

I enjoyed it. A pity the husband didn't get more action and the demon didn't want her arsehole serviced, but I still enjoyed it.

then kisses her mouth? Agile ;-) Interesting little tale and well written