All Comments on 'Den of Iniquity Ch. 03'

This is so FUCKING good- it should be a book!

Sir Nathan,

I have really missed this story over the last several weeks. I agree with the other reader; this is well written enough to be published in a book. I can't wait for your next installments.

I have been waiting for this story to continue. I am already hooked. PLease don't keep us waiting to long for the next piece of the puzzle. Your character development is wonderful. Thank you

Faerymist

Nathan,

Well done, beautifully developed and enjoyable... can't wait for the raunch.. !!

This far exceeds anything I've read...WELL DONE

Sir_Nathan, my, my --- it takes my breath away!!!

excellent....can't wait for the next chapter...

One again, your writing has left me yearning for moe. The wait for this one was well worth it. I hope to read your next chapter sooner than later.....

Waiting with baited breath.....

~L~

Nathan Sir, thank You for the depiction of the lifestyle i am coming to love. I am so looking forward to watching Roger grow into the promise that he seems to show. Will be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.

love this chapter its great leaves me wanting more lol

keep up the great writing

A beautifully written story that left me green with jelousy. I could try for a hundred years and never have an ounce of your writting tallent. Also it was incredibly hot!

It is such a pleasure to read Your work. Once again it is not only very well written but it also leaves the reader, wanting more. As i do look forward to reading the rest of the chapters. ~Blessed Be

It's highly unlikely a large law firm (spending 50K on some parties... reasonable to infer they have over 100 employees) that someone would not be offended just by the invitation. There's a million dollar lawsuit against the firm that would probably win. Suspension of disbelief is severely hampered.

This chapter was educational in a way, but not altogether different from what I assumed instinctively. I may share it. :) Thank you!

I thank you Sir Nathan for your story. I am new to the lifestyle and have wondered how a Dominant learns and begins their journey. You are capturing me in a way I did not expect.

Sir_Nathan, thank you for this story! i am loving it so far, and can't wait to find out how it ends.

Absolutely spellbinding. Please....keep writing. It is you.

Entertained, entranced and enlightened.

Sir_Nathan, I so far the story is wonderful and I am extremely I found you writings. this is not the first story of yours I've read and I do so love your work. I really hope you start posting stories again. There really is nothing like them.

New to the site, third story read, impressed with the quality of this prose. Myself a 'Voyeur' of literary porn, find so much more to admire in your writing. You have a new follower.

Throughly enjoying this series of stories