All Comments on 'Depression'

This is really too short of a story to form much of an opinion on. I would of also rather had you do this from the elf's POV so the last two paragraphs wouldn't feel as out of place.

but you could have added a few things to make it a bit longer. not necessarily have the elfs point of view but since the unicorn is a magical creature she could see his dreams and learn more about him. ive read alot of piers anthony so i know anything is possible! lol. that being said, its a good start and i look forward to reading more.

I agree it's a bit short - the stopping point seemed a bit too soon, but I'm definitely interested to read more and look forward to the next chapter.

This is a good start, I'd like to see where you take this as the POV character seems interesting and clearly has some good morals!

Like the other guys said though, the end was a little sudden and it could have been a bit longer. Shall look out for the next instalment!