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All Comments on 'Derek's Revenge Ch. 01'
by dbergen
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Anonymousalmost 14 years agoGreat Start
What a great start to a story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Bfreetorunover 11 years agoIt was a good story but you failed to end it.
Either write part 2 or you should have ended it in this one. You have left the woman restrained in a soundproof basement room with the man leaving the room. Please write the next chapter, maybe I will run across it sometime when I am surfing again.
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