All Comments on 'Desire'

This is the way to make love to a woman, taking ones time, no rush, adding growing layers of stimulation and excitement, and leading up to her crescendo finale.

One slightly jarring note, FWIW, is twice referring to her "pussy hole." It sounds ugly, and in fact there really is no hole. There is an opening, but it exists as more of a potential space than a gaping orifice. You were describing great beauty, and "hole" just stood out. I realize this is splitting hairs, but the story is so close to perfect, that any slight imperfection stands out. And to others, this may not have even been a problem at all.

I can't understand how anyone rating this story could give it anything but 5 stars.