All Comments on 'Desires within Young Girls Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Another abrupt ending.

There is potential here, but it's too choppy. It makes reading difficult.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
Realy good start

Really a good start, could have given it four stars but you left me hanging at the end so only three stars

justlooking98justlooking98about 2 years ago

We all know that this story should lead to fondling while she s over his lap, and then sex. Is the author afraid

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