All Comments on 'Desolation'

by jjsharshaw

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Malice2Malice2over 18 years ago
Holy shit.

DUDE. My jaw is on the floor. You are one sick fuck and I love it!! It may take me a while but I will read everything you've got. I can't believe I'm the first to comment on this masterpeice. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
dayum

Wow that was one wild ride and i loved every minute of it. You are a great writer and please keep up with some more

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
SO MOVING

This started out has a hot sexy story. It took a turn into a real sad and moving tale about a person who suffered from abused and as a results abused herself and let others abused her. She was lucky enough to have a friend to save her. It was more emotionally moving than sexual.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Where's the next part!

This is one to keep coming back to, write another one!

shawnsgrl22shawnsgrl22over 14 years ago

fascinating, disturbing, well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it

An excellent story please continue!

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