All Comments on 'Desperate Fever'

by Smith1012

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice!

Loved your description of each scene. The plot isnt that great but the overall erotica was arousing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You can't write quality or quantity!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Couldn't finish Page 1, nor count ALL the mistakes, starting with "a women".

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