by TE999
for taking my dream and turning it in a direction I never would have thought of. My only regret is that there wasn't time to record it. Bravo.
A sweet story, I liked the concept. I wish there had been more dialogue in the story though.
At first I thought it was too short, but then I realized it was perfect -- how long would such a tape actually be? The ghostly ending gave me chills, reminiscent of Fred Saberhagen's work. A chilling snapshot of one family's nightmare. Well done.
A very interesting format for a tale that successfully combines the erotic and the macabre. Thanks!
Interesting perspective.
Would have been fun to make this a text w/audio!
A "nice" ghost, except for the scaring the pants off the parents bit. Maybe he's not so nice after all...
...short, off-beat and well written. Good luck, TE