All Comments on 'Dexter's Renaissance Ch. 07-08'

Keep it up, I love the story.

As usual in stories I like, the dialog is good and makes the characters believable. Good characters, developed over a period of time, so they seem to be real.

Very, very boring.

this might not be exciting or "boring" to some people, but the writing is good. Them who are bored have the free will not to read this anyway keep it going 3.5*

GREAT READ, WELL WRITTEN AND THOUGHT OUT.PROBABLY BORING TO THOSE WHO ONLY WANT SEX AND VIOLENCE. COASTER TWO LOVE THIS STORY,KEEP THEM COMING PLEASE..

5 stars.

Well written. Excellent description of human relationship. Sure it has been non-erotic but they are very interesting people. My only complaint would be that there seems to be a lack of villains in the piece, just one grumpy, unhappy leftover dinosaur.

But who needs that all of the time ? Not me . The author is showing a deft purposefully low key touch keeping all cylinders firing in time, keeping this story moving slowly but surely to what my intuition feels will be a very good place.

although he's on temporary assignement there. So this is enough drama in the situation itself.

Had to think twice to remember the first wifes transgression again, falling for the scam boy it was, I believe.

I can't vouch for any direction this should take and that's excellent coaster2, thank you.

To be honest I must admit that I kind of miss the twins though, but that's just an old mans fantasies running wild.

Looking out for what's to come!

and once committed, when is the fun. TK U MLJ LV NV

Found a couple flat points during the read but what do I know I couldn't write myself out of a paper pose

Coaster

Thanks for a well written, low key, human story that could really happen. Nice characters in the main and well worth reading

Oops, I woke up. What'd I miss?

Certainly well written. Five stars. Not much drama, though. The initial conflict of the story, which gave it pop, seems entirely resolved and all but forgotten.

I hear you, Drbeamer, was expecting more conflict in a Loving Wives story.

lots of nice people,

a mellow picnic,

and

. . . .

one must improvise and glad-hand. TK U MLJ LV NV

and planning for the personal future. TK U MLJ LV NV

I know it turned out otherwise, but I’m sorry, extending an invitation to a company picnic to a partner isn’t exactly asking her out on a date!

I don't think there could be a bigger contrast than Michelle and the twins.

I know they've been remodeling the office, but do we have to watch the paint dry?

As someone who has been in exactly the type of merger/reorganizations of engineering offices described in the last few chapters, I cannot believe I am inflicting this story on myself. I am familiar enough with them, that the idea that an accounting system could be swapped out in two weeks is about the only fantasy in this story.

Not terribly exciting, but it’s still a great story.

You weave a great story and keep it interesting.