by JMaxwell69
Great story! it was a pleasure to read with some very interesting characters and a great ending. Thanks.
But that was because I felt short changed at the all-too-brief ending. Otherwise the story was fairly well played.
I liked this story a lot. There could have been a bit more 'flesh' before the end, some more details about further services by our hero, but, well, readers should use their own imagination, too. The plot itself was great and the workmanship faultless. Keep going.