All Comments on 'Did I Make The Cut? Ch. 02'

keep writing, i'm loving this story

Glad to finally have another chapter. I gave you finally outing Calvin for his cheating. Jeez, how many signs do you need before you realize your guy is with someone else? I enjoyed the chapter alot. I look forward to more.

I have nothing constructive to say, just praise. I read both chapters today and look forward to more. We know they have a happy ending, but I can't wait to see how they get there.

Peace and joy,

Shell

i'M SO GLAD YOU POSTED A 2ND CH.! I WAS DYING WITH WAIT...anyways loved it plz keep writing! =)

Wow, great story, I really love the organization where you already know that Niclas and Lancelot end up married but it's all about how they got there. I'll be waiting patiently for and update!

It's a good story line, sexy characters. The grammar errors are not serious but there are many and they get in the way of the flow of the story. keep writing please, maybe just a second set of eyes

Love the story, can't wait for the new chapter.

P.S. dude if your going to complain about grammar, why don't you try to write a story. And seriously, it's freakin literotica, if you want good grammar, pick up a book.

well, i just want to say thank you for those who liked my story and again I'm really, really sorry for making you guys wait for the second chapter.

and i would also like to apologize for the errors some of you are talking about. i thought i was able to correct every mistake I've made before submitting this story online, i guess not. anyway, can you be kind enough and point it out for me? thanks!

spraying more love,

the Naked Llama