All Comments on 'Did I Make The Cut? Ch. 03'

loved it can't wait to see what happens

Obviously, Niclas is a better person than I will ever be because he just took all of that crap from Frankie and Calvin w/o any retaliation. I mean, I felt like he was just getting rolled over time and time again and he's still nice with them? WOW! I guess that phrase about turning the other cheek is true for Niclas.

I just can't do that. If that was me, I would of beaten Frankie to a pulp coz I'd be so mad and devastated or would of said some hurtful things back or something. Yep, Niclas is a better person but I see it as being weak and characters like that annoys the shit out of me!

2 more chapters huh? I can't wait for the other chapters.

Cheers! (:

I am so glad you decided to continue this story. Still waiting to see how this is going to have a happy ending. If the journey is life, then every step tells the story. So I will wait for your next post.

I can't wait to see what happens next and hope Frankie gets bad karma.

While I love the story as a whole I felt like this chapter was a little over dramatic and I was really looking forward to some Lance and Niclas scenes. But I understand that a story of this depth needs backstory, and look forward to your next chapter

love it, can wait for the next chapter... to bad a bout the fight hope you posted soon... your becaming one of my fav

love your story can wait to read how they come together jijijiii

But your grammar is terrible!!! Get yourself an editor quickly, because the syntax errors are ruining an otherwise delightful story.