All Comments on 'Did You Ever Get Stung? Ch. 04'

by VMKane

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
This is really just... fucking great

It wasn't just a good story, it was great writing. I was going to give up on this site when I gave this a chance. Please write more on Jenna and Sian, I would love to see how their sexual relationship developed. It was very tasteful.

Arago007Arago007about 9 years ago
Clear picture :)

Interesting and well written story. I liked the characters and style of dialogue. Now that I am through the four chapters I can say the author did a really good job - I was intrigued, it was thought provoking and at the end the story made sense.

MissLisaJonesMissLisaJonesabout 9 years ago
OK, so I'm biased

but the sheer quality of V's writing lifts it head and shoulders above the rest. Even though the roots of this Faustian tale are rooted in the fantastic the sex, and those participating, are very real and, for me, that makes it all the hotter.

And, yes, I know it's not the easiest read but if you want stories that focus on the 'Lit' as well as the 'erotica' then this is the place to come - both figuratively and literally.

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