by tabinma
I enjoyed the story. I liked the anal since I'm a big butt freak. However, I think the story should've been longer or slower in pace.
Make it up to us and write a part two with even more ass play.
Thanks.
Not a lot. Where was the necessary sexy build up, to lead to a decent description of sex?
You need to slow it down and try to excite us much more deliberately and slowly. Keep trying please.