All Comments on 'Dies Irae'

Sensual and mysterious, seductive and scary. I like it!

While i love learning new words, it would be wise to tone it down for the readers. much gets lost when the reader has to use the dictionary more than twice.

I don't think we are dealing with functional illiterates reading here, and having some intelligent content is great. There are many here, I am quite sure, that get tired of or ignore stories who cannot do more or develop beyond repeating fuck, cunt, cock, suck, and cum cum cum cum cum cum, ad nauseum. I think many of us want a story as well a steaming hot sex!

To thelema: Keep writing interesting well developed stories! PLEASE!

Obviously Matthias is a vampire and perhaps Vincent is a werewold to make them ancient enemies. Whow ould have the power to send them? My major interest would be what is Beauty other than a dog....

I thought that I had already read the dumbest of comments re lit stories, but the reader who complains about vocabulary should obviously spend their time elsewhere...like an English or vocab class. Alternatively, maybe he/she should spend more time reading great literature and naturally building their vocab.

Here is not the place to develop literacy. When I was in high school, Harlequin romances were often recommended to those who needed to expand their vocab since by their very nature they avoid using the same words and have a plethora (see your dictionary) of synonyms throughout.

Then again, if you're under 18 you shouldn't be here anyway.

I thought it was an excellent chapter. Interesting. Well thought out characters and not derivative of other vampire stories.

That woman is a very unlikable character it would help if the protagonist was a likable person