by RedRavenBaltimore
Interesting and I think enjoyable. Wonder what it is master/hubby wants her to be at the end of this, strong slave or automaton? Being too 'spoiled' and willful, I probably would have been pounding that red button!
A great teaser as to what will come...my only thought is to make the following chapters longer,I think that makes them more readable:)
What an excellent start to this story, it has all the makings of being something special, I certainly hope it is. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
for the more! You hooked me...curious to see how this develops...Thanks and Take care --