All Comments on 'Dirty Daughter'

Way too much "Daddy" and "baby girl", he's not talking to a 5 year-old.

Your story is exactly what my fantasy is. I've wanted my stepdad Rick for years, and I pictured me as your daughter. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail be if you want to hit me up....9v

' The knowledge that his baby girl would not become a parent allowed him the release he needed and the useless seeds coated her slick walls. '

Ugh! Way to kill a fucking orgasm dude! :(. That fucking ruined it for me :/ fuck.

' He pictured Angie sucking off another guy while he plowed his way into her. '

...and if it wasn't ruined enough, you had to go and throw that in there. Ugh. I'm nauseous now. What dad would willingly share his daughter he had all to himself unless he was fucked in the head?! I can hear my wife now "hey honey, I want to bring bob home from the office so he can fuck me in the ass while I'm riding you." "...umm, what was that wifey, you say you want a divorce?" Lol.

"How to end a story?" Everything was going along beautifully, and then you cut the head, balls, and female genitailia off the story. 2, 3 or 4 more lines of prose and this story would have rated 5 stars. The way you ended it dropped it down to three stars. I was so upset with the ending, I almost gave you a two star rating.

Very beautifully detailed writing I hope u keep writing this was a favourite of mine

There is a fantasy of mine to have a daughter just like her...

Pretty good!! Turned off at the end with his thought of two guys fucking her though:/ fuck sharing, 'daddy only' is getting tattooed above both her holes ;)

I loved it keep on writing

I don't condone this type of relationship either but you wrote a very enjoyable story that read really well.

I only just discovered you and wanted to pour out my admiration but I have been beaten to the punch. You tell a tale that gets right into my core, and best of all you do it without an over supply of four letter words.

Another powerful masterpiece!

really, an excellent job on this story. I really loved how it turned from realization of shared interest into the fantasies. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to finish it this time ;) but what I read was superbly done.

This was a great story, and I wanted to see who your favorite authors are, so I went to that tab and went from *this* story to http://www.literotica.com/s/the-hands-1. OMG I want another daddy story lol. That had to have been the creepiest, scariest story ever. The author was fantastic. I am still wet but, omg, it scared the shit out of me. I just couldn't stop reading it because he is such a great storyteller. Have a great day/evening and please write more daddy/girl stories that are believable and daddy is not some crazy asshole and the girl isn't some crazy slut. Was awesome!

that was intensely fulfilling and wonderfully written. I have much to catch up on with your stories... brilliant.. not even sure a sequel is needed.. stands so well on its own.

Fantastic! Really want a sequel with daddy and his friends taking turns on Angie!

I luv your dirty, filthy, creative mind. Keep writing you have talent to spare... Ace

NICE!!! Might there be a sequel?

Very well written story. Keep writing!

YOURE AN AMAZING WRITER AND I GOT REALLY FIRED UP OVER THIS KEEP GOING LOVE ALL YOUR WORK

Well written and so natural. Thank you.

Whew! GREAT story!!! The only thing that disappointed me was only being able to give 5 stars to a story that is worth so much, much more!

Any plans for a sequel to this one? "The Further Adventures of....?"

A true feast for the imagination. Exceptional craftsmanship and perfect execution, truly one of my favorites.

this is exactly my fantasy too...mmm.my dad n me doing this.

amazing, my cock is rock hard now and i'll be playing soon. ver hot and well written

Terrific story. Very arousing, well told, explicit without being trashy. You have the gift. Congratulations! And thank you for a tale well told. I wish you were my daddy ooooooooo yes indeed luved it to bits and thank you gratly certainly got me aroused very aroused mmmmmm mmmmmmm:)

I think every father at some point wonders what it would be like. Most pretend they never had such thoughts, some hold on to them as fantasies for long times, and some actually act them out. I'll leave it to eternity to place condemnation where it belongs, if anywhere.

Terrific story. Very arousing, well told, explicit without being trashy. You have the gift. Congratulations! And thank you for a tale well told.

Sorry, could not resist. Anyways, this is normally not my category but I saw a new story and was drawn like a moth to the flame. First of all, let me say that I stand amazed at your prodigious output. Second, let me say that this story was handled about as tastefuly as possible given the subject matter. Third, normally I try to give some helpful feedback, but this story I was just imrpessed all the way through. Good going!