All Comments on 'Dirty Dawg: The Indian Intern'

Lousy plot, poorly written, awful dialogue. A waste of time reading it. Sorry for the blunt comment.

Full of naughty thoughts and actions. Not as original as it might be, but this is an erotic story site and you did well. I want to read more about this naughty pair, so continue the story please.

while others expect to be titillated and teased I can appreciate a story written about a brotha getting with an Indian woman with a Phat ass! Not everyone will agree but, there are not enough writers here that put voluptuous females in their stories. some think that just adding "big tits" does the job; well not for me it doesn't. I'm looking forward to the next installment! keep them coming!

I read stories on literotica for one reason only: To bust a nut.

Your stories help me with that on a daily basis, please continue to write more.

This is 1 of the best stories iv read in ages! I mean you've got the erotic ish pegged down, I love the plot#Fantastic! But what I really enjoyed was the subtle element of erotic humour! The old man hahaha can't wait to read the next part. This story makes me wanna signup as a literotica user lol

Best thing around here in a long time. I can't wait for the continuation!

Didnt finish this one sad sounds like it would of been a great one.

This was dope I wonder how it'll work out

Hey mondotoken, this was a good start got any more?

You promised us to learn more about Laila ! I'm still waiting ^^

Really wish you had written a Part 2 to this, it was a really good read.