by SonofGondor
Glad to finally get some feedback on this.
I know that there are a couple of spelling/grammar issues, but hopefully they weren't too off-putting.
If people would enjoy a sequel, I will certainly write one!
but without the next day, there isn't really too much to get excited about.
Thanks to everyone who's read and voted so far.
Please feel free to leave feedback or comments, especially if you'd like to see a sequel to this story.