All Comments on 'Dirty Dolly's Pimp'

great idea good story

but very hurried needs to be a longer story by far

would a be a good read if it were not so rushed

feels like 0-60 in 3 seconds lol slow down an enjoy the ride i always say !

well written but needed to be longer

little bit better, but still nobody enjoys it visibly. a good joke would be better to laugh about. why always so in a hurry ? I had a lot more erotic experiences in Vancouver with all the nice strippergirls.

God I hope you continue and maybe write more stories also with hollys view.

shit--Not sure what that makes the writer