All Comments on 'Discipline and Consequences'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Restraint

Well written , I like the restraint in the name of pleasure without the degradation and humiliation of some of the sub dom stories .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
BLAH

In order for a story to have a huge impact... there has to be suspense, or build up... or some kind of hook. This was just blah. It was too unoriginal, and has been done to death. Wouldn't have been half bad if you had given the characters more life... more personality... but I'm sticking with ... Blah.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice story

Part two needs more sex, more submission as she wants to be in this position

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hot shit

Ima go ahead and let you know that was a solid, to the point, sexy ass stroke story. Yup. All the points.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I liked the sweet ending. Nice touch. Also, the soft way he touched her really turned me on.

moresubthanslavemoresubthanslaveabout 6 years ago
Loved it

I really liked this story! Great job.

LittleMousyKeysLittleMousyKeysover 5 years ago
Tantalizing

What a wonderful way to teach a lesson.. one that'll (hopefully) need to be taught again!

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