by tropebee
Well written , I like the restraint in the name of pleasure without the degradation and humiliation of some of the sub dom stories .
In order for a story to have a huge impact... there has to be suspense, or build up... or some kind of hook. This was just blah. It was too unoriginal, and has been done to death. Wouldn't have been half bad if you had given the characters more life... more personality... but I'm sticking with ... Blah.
Part two needs more sex, more submission as she wants to be in this position
Ima go ahead and let you know that was a solid, to the point, sexy ass stroke story. Yup. All the points.
I liked the sweet ending. Nice touch. Also, the soft way he touched her really turned me on.
What a wonderful way to teach a lesson.. one that'll (hopefully) need to be taught again!