All Comments on 'Discovering Daddy Ch. 01'

H-O-T !!

One of the best written stories I've read. I'm enjoy the build up and your descriptions of the scenes taking place are exceptional and not entirely unbelievable. Can't wait for the next installment.

Subtly crafted story.I was lured into your web with each page and enjoyed the read. Looking forward to more...Please continue.

Incredibly conducive to a heavy discharge of vaginal fluids.

What a great super yummy story - Thanks

Beautiful, sweet and sexy! My very wet pussy thanks you!

I found it sorta bland....the title really suggested something between the dad and the daughter so when it doesn't happen it's disappointing.

Where the hell have you been son? You NEVER fail to amaze me with your knowledge (you called it fantasy fulfillment, remember?) of the way women tick sexually. We just got to "see" two very hot, beautiful, sexy, and just blooming young women engage in one of the most erotic scenes ever published on this site, and it was just wonderful. The dawning of new sexual awareness occured for us all at one time and left sweet, sweet memories for all of us, but throwing in Callie's feelings for her dad really blew the lid off. More chapters! We need MORE chapters. Welcome back...

i liked the fact that the father/daughter bit was eluded to but didnt happen. it didnt make me feel grotesque for reading this story.it was definately a worthwhile read. hey i came...twice:)

It was another one of your great reads....I loved the buildup and am anxiously awaiting more of the tail. A forever fan

What's it got to do with Valentine's Day? One passing mention, that's all.

The writing was good, and the story was decent, my major complaint is that this was listed as a Valentines Day Contest Entry and I found it had precious little to do with the criteria for the contest.

it is a nice story about two sisters sharing their wild sexy secrets.a bit repetetive but pretty good.

Very interesting story

eager to continue this story......i know the rest will be even more erotic.....xoxo jazzy

Lengthy, but realistic & effective narrative of building seduction. A Crawling pace is so much more exciting than Jumping when it cums to seduction. I really enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek self-talk of the narrator, without reliance on foul verbage, which would have been out of context in these realistic characterisations.

...to make me cum. I have you bookmarked and I return often. Keep the cums coming!

WOW! What can I say? I was in the room, with the sisters, like magic! Thanks for the opportunity! I'm on to the next chapter!

Been a while, but re-reading this! Still great! ;)

This is my first encounter with your stories... I really really wish there was a way to rate a 5⭐️ Story to fifth power... Seriously... My vocabulary doesn't even contain adjectives worthy enough to fuel this comment.

Vivid imagery and excellent characters and details!

J

This is probably the most believable set up I've ever read here.

A shame that you used repetitive themes, so that it jolted me out of the fantasy. The story turned me on, but failed to make me cum. Also the failure of making it a Valentine story was a pity. I could tell this was more of a Christmas or Spring break timeframe.

The story is sexy, but more than that is the writing. It is so wonderful I don't know why you are not a published author - maybe you are. It also made me wonder whether you might be a woman because your description of the girls masturbating is so detailed and sounds so knowledgeable. Although the story is on a taboo topic, incest, and although I know that the two sisters will soon be fucking their father, it still has an air of innocence - about two sisters talking to each other in a loving

way, although talking about a very sexual experience the older sister has had. Amazing writing.

Love the pacing and the slow build up...looking forward to more.

Really looking forward to what's coming. Hot