All Comments on 'Discovery'

by lord_bob

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gypziedollgypziedollover 17 years ago
Innocent Love

A very gentle and loving portrayal of genuine love and affection between a Father and Daughter. I hope to read more of your stories Lord Bob, I do like your writing style.

Gypzie

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good and sexy

hope to read some more from you

klaxxklaxxover 15 years ago
Excellent!

Very loving and innocent, as others have already mentioned. Well written, also. I would have liked to have had it go slower, though. The realization and the sex happened too quickly. No foreplay was a disappointment.<br><br>Keep up the great work, though. I look forward to reading more of your work.

HornyViginAngelHornyViginAngelover 10 years ago
So sweet.

Will you make a sequel?

MhouserMhouseralmost 6 years ago
Continue

You should really continue this story and make it a wonderful love story between a father and daughter.

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