All Comments on 'Discovery Ch. 01'

Very nice story.

While this may be a true story I get no idea of any kind of character from you or the Teacher. I'm afraid bland and boring might be a bit harsh but true. Some one once described fucking as 'an active verb denoting motion'. Try this again with a more descriptive voice and actions. Try to put to voice how it felt when she touched you- you may have been shy, but don't let that hold you back here. I'd give you my name but I've had this site for so long I've forgotten my name and password. Good luck on the next try though.

If she was as sexed up as your story told, she would not have been concerned about a condom. You have to remember....in these fantasy stories there is no such thing as a pregnancy or STD, and barebacked fucking would be very erotic in a story such as this with her all sexed up and wanting your seed in her full lusty position.