All Comments on 'Discovery Island'

Fantastic!

Beautifully and sensitively written -- the author is obviously familiar with sex (no surprise there), but also with the history and mores of WWII and the postwar period in the UK.

Good job! Very enjoyable read.

Thank you.

and a nice tempo.. We tend to think of that time as being a period when, as you write, the notion of sex for enjoyment would have been shocking and something "good" girls would never consider. This is a gentle romantic story that suggests that there was a lot of frustrated libido waiting to for the right opportunity. Keep up the good work

Thanks for this excellent story. Hope you're going to submit another one soon. 5 Stars--easily.

Moore please now sex with son in law, please

You are an excellent writer, as you know. But in Discovery Island you've outdone yourself. I am a bit of a scribbler myself and darn it you've come back to raise the bar! More if you will; do keep up the superb storytelling. Kal

I came by your story by chance,and was very pleased that I did,it was well written and well described.It get me enthralled all the way to end,since thn I have started to read the other stories you have.

Since reading this story i have started to read your others.

Keep up the good writing.Please let me know if you are are planning a further chapter,please

Thanks.

Tony

Very well done! It felt good to read a story that had a real story line up to the sex. I'll be reading your other stories for sure. Paul

You must write more of this. Please!

Please ! continue your contributions. The descriptive portions were almost as enjoyable as the sexual parts. This is just out-Fucking-standing. Thank you for a very intelligent and arousing story!

brilliant story with well developed characters and narrative drive - the sexual element was well written and exciting - i am very taken with french knickers myself

i hope there will be more to come

This is really well written - with good description of characters and the environment. The mental pictures of the island and its specific sites is as vivid as the image of the sexual encounter (- and actually also more memorably since they in this framework are so special compared to all the sexual depiction).

One could possibly think that the sexual tension was allowed to grow over some more days before Jack and Amanda let all inhibitions drop - especially with the more "frozen" sexual state Amanda is described as coming from - but that would of course have made the story even longer, and the escalation is anyhow steadily rising.

One of the worst on this site ! This sicko should be institutionalized . "1*" .

The use of the word 'faggot' implies that the anonymous writer of the previous comment is American.

This is a story, and a good one, about a man and a woman. There is NO mention of homosexuality between the characters, the author, or even the readers, How the fuck can anyone presume from it that Brits are faggots. What a fucking imbecile. I am forced to come to the conclusion that the writer of that comment is a queer himself. So why don't you crawl out of the closet and man up. I take it you don't like Brits, why not, jealous of British virility are we?

I can only say that if 80% of Brits are faggots, then 90% of Americans are plain fucking brain dead.

Very well written (unlike so many others here) and the retro British twist is a winner. Keep calm and carry on......

Typical Pommy faggot mind excrement ! 1* .

You write like a person who lived near that time. Rationing Did hit London pretty hard. The then Princess Ellizabeth used clothing ration stamps to buy her wedding dress. On a sheep farm with a good garden, they would probably eat much better than a Londoner would. The installations that are now crumbling would have been intact and if not new, still usable. Evidently Jenny didn't prepare Amanda very well for her stay on the island because even today, a remote sheep farm is no place for high heels and tight skirts. The Radio as a piece of furniture was the means of acquiring the news and being entertained. I've been told of evenings listening to Jack Benny as more like 'watching the radio'. I wonder how Amanda's life has changed? Her Companionship with Jack, her new DISCOVERYS of her sexual needs. Will her future include a home on Discovery Island?

There is not iota of any writing skills or even literacy.

Writer should find another hobby, like cleaning toilets.

I gave you a 5

Romantic, very erotic and gloriously evocative of both the wonderful setting and their mutual arousal

This writer is an incompetent ass. I agree with anon to go back to cleaning toilets.

To be quite enjoyable!

Loved the story. So natural and honest.

I really enjoyed this story. The story line was 100% believable and the pace of the story was just right.

I look forward to reading some of your other work.

I wasn't sure I would enjoy this story at the start, it seemed to be just a little old fashioned for me, but boy was I wrong. I know it's a Brit thing with knickers instead of panties, but I'm okay with that because I automatically substitute panties for knickers as I read. Once Amanda got to the island things got heated up quickly and it was very natural progression but very erotic. The whole story was a look back into the sexual past which is so foreign to most people nowadays. People weren't as sexualy "liberated" then as they are now. Way to go Jack!

Loved it. Loved the characters, the plot, the writing

Really liked it a lot. Nice pace without rushing things. Look forward to more of your stories.