All Comments on 'Divorce and Future - Passed'

Excellence realized sir.

I like SiFi and Fantasy and I really I like this, a lot. That said had Tina gone back in time to just before her mother went on that dinner and simply 'took' Davenport then the story would not fill a paragraph, so there would be no story. Then again Tina's mother would not have been sexually assaulted and they would have lived happily from then on. No brainer in my opinion, she goes for Davenport before the dinner.

Such an awesome story

For a sci-fi nerd it was perfect

5 ⭐️

An enjoyable and eye opening read. I'm the story, even Davenport had sired Jakey, it would have been well if Jake had learned to accept him as his son. But that's not your story

I liked your story and rate it four stars.

JPB

What the hell.

Five stars.

JPB

Tachyons are lethal? As I understand it they don't interact with normal matter in any way. Oh well... It's Stang's universe in the story so let's just roll with it. 5 stars.