by Dotrice1
The build-up is a bit long, but the payoff is well worth it! Nicely done!
Great story, I hope you add more to it, like getting that redhead, and maybe some of her friends there for an orgy, or just them and the redhead.....
I loved this story! I hope you write more like it ... soon! Keep up the great work!
Definitely one of the best erotic stories I've read in a very long time. What I enjoyed the most is that your style is extremely erotic and intimate, without resorting to cheapening your work by using stock and standard images or phrases. Love the inventiveness of your imagery! 5 Star!
I enjoyed the dance of power you played for these characters; just enough power to set a tone, but enough latitude to release the floodgates of curious, daring desire. It was verrrry good. Thank you.