All Comments on 'Do Anything'

by Dotrice1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
perhaps perfect

This is perhaps the perfect erotic story. Really.

salukidawgsalukidawgover 15 years ago
Good Stuff

The build-up is a bit long, but the payoff is well worth it! Nicely done!

patricia51patricia51over 15 years ago
YumYUMMMMM

Delicious, salacious and absolutely lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW

Great story, I hope you add more to it, like getting that redhead, and maybe some of her friends there for an orgy, or just them and the redhead.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
loved it

I loved this story! I hope you write more like it ... soon! Keep up the great work!

RayneOfPassionRayneOfPassionover 14 years ago
Phrasing was Excellent

Definitely one of the best erotic stories I've read in a very long time. What I enjoyed the most is that your style is extremely erotic and intimate, without resorting to cheapening your work by using stock and standard images or phrases. Love the inventiveness of your imagery! 5 Star!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 11 years ago
Lovely!

I enjoyed the dance of power you played for these characters; just enough power to set a tone, but enough latitude to release the floodgates of curious, daring desire. It was verrrry good. Thank you.

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