All Comments on 'Do-It-Yourself Story Kit'

Isn't this the same form I sent you sixty years ago. You still haven't paid me for it. ROTFLMAO

Nice shot and so true in so many portions.

I love your fill in the blanks concept. I have laughed for at least 5 minutes going back over your simplistic form.

As I’m one of the wimps who is to afraid to venture into writing a story to post, it is people like yourself who are such good writers, who scare the heck out of me. For me to think I could write something people would enjoy reading is decimated by Authors like you who are so very good at not just telling a story, but relay it as to make the reader feel he or she is experience the story first hand.

I know I’m not a writer, but I do know what I like to read and just because I cannot produce the wine, I do know what tastes good to me. Someone else may find the wine lacking and others might agree with me. You don’t have to know how to write a movie to be able to tell if you like it or not. Thus is the life of consuming what we are given to try.

I will someday have to put out something so I can be humbled by my fellow commenters and brought into line of: you criticized other writers. I deserve to be taken to task for my critiques of the past. Some of us commenters are so self-enamored that a little comeuppance would do some of us good.

I will try and write one of the many stories in my head and take my whooping like a man or find my feminine side and cry like hell.

Thank you for your talent that you share with us.

With great respect (I’m sucking up in case I write a story)

PT

You are a sick twisted fuck...Will you marry me?

Very funny. It will keep me going on slow days when there isnt much I want to read. Maybe for the next iteration you can make drop down multiple choices so I dont have to overtax my imagination. You also need to allow for something more than just basic cheating iin the discovery and revenge parts (i.e. fucking best friend(s), group sex, orgies, bestiality, etc etc etc).

Nice going though. Its nice to have a laugh about this once in a while to keep things in persepective since some of us tend to take these stories a bit too seriously.

I too want to be a famous writter. This was some funny shit.

Hilariously funny. LYG, where did you find Just Plain Bob's story template? :D

That must the funnest piece I have read in a while.

<3 your work, BTW.

I don't think you are charging enough for your kit---it seems that everyone is using it!!

Um...me and my boyfriend filled out some mad lib type fill in the blank answers and Im fairly certain our story is awful. But we cracked up laughing the entire time. Thanks for the giggles ;)

When it's time to insert wife's name, the qualifying statement should be entered: (If British, insert, "my wife" at every instance of otherwise using her given name.)

whenever he goes past the YMCA he says"Look, they spelled Macy's wrong."

And many of these stories are scripted just like this. And, no, I have not ventured into writing my stories yet. I will be the worst BTB writer you ever saw with a lot of beatings and possibly a few murders. I appreciate all that YOU write.

What could go wrong?

I hope this gets a few side liners off their collective butts & into the 'fray'. The 'fray' can be good or bad depending whether you can spell, how good your grammar is, & whether you can tell a story.

I would suggest to any would be writers to look how well they convey real events to other at a social function. If they do well, then they have a chance to write fiction. Otherwise, I suggest that they take a true event, change enough of the event to become unrecognizable by those involved in the event, & embellish it as needed.

GOOD LUCK ALL YOU WANT TO WRITERS!

And thanks to the Public Feedback Portal which (sadly) contains only the 15 most recent comments on stories. But without it I wouldn't have found Leapyearguy's masterpiece.

It's good to see that the formula for writing a Loving Wives story hasn't changed over the decade since 2006. Wonderful.

Lue

You encapsulate half the stories on the site and highlight why a few of you transcend the mundane to entertain.

Can I get a refund......

5ssss

bill

Just fill my tank up with a few more of these LYG.

This deserves far more views.

Don't forget the mustang!

Worst case of ______ I've ever seen.

It's not you, I just need to explore...not having a lover before our marriage 12 years ago.

I don't love him, baby, it's only sex.

Barbara told me I Had to try Black cock.

Your Boss told me that it was the only way for you to get the promotion.

I never meant to hurt you.

What can I do to make up for it?

I told Her that 15 years of her infidelity was enough.

Now, 3 years since the divorce, she's haggard, broke, and living in a cold water flat.

You left out...

Unbeknownst to my soon to be ex-wife, before we met I was ________________________ (insert special military device or convert intelligence background)

What about the obligatory condo?

Hilarious

Kudos to the anonymus contributor who left his/her comment beforehand ThomerKy. You'll find the obligatory elements that LYG missed out on there, nicely rounded up and corralled.

Nailed it! Dead on perfect.

Hah! Yes! I should have consulted this handy kit before trying to figure out and write my own first, dumbass story. Would have saved a few months of agonizing, weeping and gnashing of teeth, not to mention providing a much more satisfactory result! Much appreciated.

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Nobel Prize in Literotica literature.

Play it as Mad Libs!