All Comments on 'Do Over'

Believable plot and good writing.

Brilliant.

I was disappointed that she kept her head and pushed him off. I wanted them both to lose control

going down memory lane may have a certain attraction but being in peace with yourself and respect you marriage, especially if it's a good one, can/will be much more rewarding. Thanks for ending it this way.

This is probaly what happens to most people in real life a wonderful story and very well written. This is the first of yours I've read and loved it. I very much hope there is more!

Thank you for sharing that with us.

I have trouble accepting his approach to his former girlfriend. He is very forward and frankly a bit crass in his approach to getting her in bed. He obviously cares nothing for his wife, nor for her husband. It is one thing to be attracted to a former flame, but a little respect is in order..... Maybe if he had shown a little class, he might have succeeded?

Last year I attended my 50th class reunion. What a disappointment, because all those good looking girls had gotten old. Only one of them looked good and it was amazing, because she looked fifteen years younger than all the others and with no face lifts.

who almost became a bad girl. Nicely done. Easily readable and realistic. Thank you.

I've avoided every class reunion for 40 years, but have given mild thought to going to 50 next year. Yours was a good, honest, life reflection of memories and a moment.

Thanks! I enjoyed your story. Right after reading it yesterday I was a bit disappointed, or more likely, frustrated. That was the simple and straightforward yearning to come into the narrator by proxy (which, yes, I was ready for). But early this morning the story came back to me, this time identifying with her laying in the tub, as invisible and discretely, I came with her in a wet dream. The frustration found a pleasing resolution. Thanks again.

with the "do over" phrase, and a good recognition of taking a moment to evaluate the differnce between experiencing what "we never did" and what she has in 25 years of loving commitment and a child who still needs the parenting lesson in regard to "do overs".

Nice to read a story about a wife with a little self control though she did push it to the limits.

...ummm, since when is "finger fucking" not cheating? Did slick Willie lower the bar that much?

What a great story, I glad that she had the courage to remember that she as a happily married woman and resisted the temptation. I agree with a few of the other comments that she did cheat to a certain degree and "finger fucking" is definitely breaking her marriage vows and qualifies as cheating. What would her husband said, probably divorced her and kicked her to the curb.. She should have stopped it when Mike first tried to kiss her. Now she has to live with the guilt that she did almost gave in and cheated to the point where I believe it would have destroyed her and her marriage. She missed the speeding bullet, barely. Well done 5 stars