All Comments on 'Do-Right Service Station'

Hello,

Your story was very different in its approach and very creative. I actually laughed out loud a few times and its refeshing to see someone who knows how to use a spellcheck. There was the odd cliche, but no harm, no foul.

Man heading for home after two weeks on the road picks up a will of the wisp pale woman on a strange stretch of highway.

Things progress nicely including a little rest stop for - well - you know the rest! Strangely Hot!

After a while much of the stuff here reads the same.

You actually have a creative plot with a twist or two!

Great Job!