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by shadowenigma

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chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 10 years ago
Pretty good

Good writing, a very intense story which might have been better if the characters Had been fleshed out some more. Or maybe not

I Guess's then it would have been a different story

Chilled

chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 10 years ago
Error

Dam I pad changed chilly to chilled

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 10 years ago
Intense

Short, Perfect, To the Point. What else is there to say?

Prelifeic_GoatherdPrelifeic_Goatherdover 10 years ago
I thought you didn't like thinking about people as good or bad?

Haha! Oh well. Nice little short story, well worth the two year wait!

sopharoonessopharoonesover 10 years ago
can i have some of that plz?

wow, i like this more than the fantasy one i read before this! sigh, problem is u want them to be like that but also to care, trouble dem bad boys! lol wish ud write more

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