All Comments on 'Doctors Orders'

I complement your decision to write it the third person. The flow is a little choppy but pretty good for a first effort, and that will get better with practice. Keep writing!

You had some grammar issues, so you may want to get an editor to help. Otherwise, this was a decent first story, though a bit short. I will assume that there will be a few chapters to follow this up.

Liked it. Keep it going!

Great premise. I hope you continue this and add to the story. You set it up well for a sequel. Terrific work overall. Big fan.

was a good read,could I have the name of that Dr, lol need to take my wife to him, lol. Joking aside was really a good read, thought it could have been longer though

You have unique and original storylnes. Keep writing. 5*s

Please continue this story line. It is most erotic and a wonderful premise to most men who would love to take their wife to this doctor.

I really like this story. I hope the series continues

I really enjoyed this story and would like to know if you plan to continue it?

Thanks so much for the kind words.

I did have plans for more, but sort of stalled out and eventually moved on to other stories. So, yes I do hope to return to this and turn it into a proper series with a conclusive ending but realistically that's not going to happen anytime soon. Sorry.

(My writing time is limited do to that pesky "having to pay bills")

I have some general ideas about where this is going, but always open to suggestions.

(My wifely duites story turned into a massive series after a reader's suggestion, so send any you have)

Great imagination and performance. Ready for the next chapter where HE realizes that she needs to be forced, in her throat and then in her pussy. She already knows that is what she needs but plays the reluctant role to keep him in control. More!