All Comments on 'Dominant Darien Ch. 01'

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A suprisingly well written and interesting start to what I hope will be a good series.

Congratulations on writing a nice piece of fiction that deals with modern relationships in a very good way.

I look forward to reading more, although you haven't given us a lot to start from, so four stars for now.

I'm interested and would like to see how this develops.